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Caitlin Wahrer's avatar

This piece was both (1) an incredible recap of what I remember "the rules" to be from my 2019 querying, and (2) an EXPANSION of what I learned. I think those bolded lines near the bottom are my own--I couldn't figure it out because I did it while reading your google doc, and then I couldn't tell from the edit history, ha! I decided to leave the bolding (mine or yours) because those particular points were so novel or important, to me!

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Kristin Offiler's avatar

Hahah your guess is as good as mine with the bolding 😆

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Andromeda Romano-Lax's avatar

Five offers! Wow!!! This is so helpful, Kristin, and I especially appreciate your final tip about taking time after the call before you accept--and leveraging that waiting period to try to get more interest from agents who haven't replied. Brilliant! (As is the multi-tier approach.)

For query examples, I often refer people to Andi Bartz's substack because she has a TREASURE TROVE (much as I hate that phrase) of actual queries by published suspense writers, including some PT contributors.

https://andibartz.substack.com/p/how-to-pitch-your-book

For those people reading all the way down through the comments:

I'm on agent #3, over a 20-year span. I got my first one after pitching to her at a conference. (I personally believe that in-person meetings can be more fruitful than cold querying, or at the very least a good secondary avenue.) I got #2 and later #3 after getting emails of introduction from editors. Many of my clients have been able to break through and at least get a partial/full request by using an introduction from another writer. So: in addition to that excellent research via Publisher's Marketplace and elsewhere, always worth making a list of every connection you have, no matter how tenuous, in case that name can gently be used, with the referrer's permission, to get your query read.

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Kristin Offiler's avatar

Yesssss, those are such great points! Thank you!

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