Dumb comment first: I objectively loved this piece. Serious comment: Huge congrats to Mo, his family, and his mentor! I loved seeing the growth in this young writer's work. Inspiring! (Also: YES. Narrative distance is a tricky one.)
Love the way you are documenting this journey and all the ideas connected to it. Great idea; thanks os much for sharing! Clearly you are an inspiring teacher/mentor.
Dumb comment first: I objectively loved this piece. Serious comment: Huge congrats to Mo, his family, and his mentor! I loved seeing the growth in this young writer's work. Inspiring! (Also: YES. Narrative distance is a tricky one.)
My objective with the subject was to speak about it as objectively as possible whilst also getting quite subjective
Love the way you are documenting this journey and all the ideas connected to it. Great idea; thanks os much for sharing! Clearly you are an inspiring teacher/mentor.
That is really, really kind of you. :)